Guess who just got promoted? (Hint: It might be you.)
Tone: Playful, Intriguing, Motivational
This one instantly sparks curiosity. Although promotions are exciting, they are often delivered dryly. Here, however, you flip the script by adding intrigue.
Big Move for [Name], your promotion deserves a high five
Type: Promotion, Career
Tone: Upbeat, personal
Readers see their name first, then an action they just achieved. That pairing sparks recognition in two seconds.
Tips
Swap “promotion” with the specific title, keep verbs lively, and add an emoji only if your list likes them.
You climbed the ladder, let’s celebrate together
Type: Promotion, Celebration
Tone: Friendly, motivational
The short action plus the invitation feels inclusive. “Climbed” paints a clear visual. This phrase establishes a direct connection between effort and reward, resonating with goal-oriented readers.
Your next chapter at [Company] starts now, congrats
Tone: Encouraging
The subject line nods to momentum. “Next chapter” frames the promotion as part of a bigger story, which primes the reader for future content such as onboarding resources.
Tips
Add a quick timeline inside the email: “Week one, coffee with your new team, week two, first sprint.”
Low effort. High reward. Just like weekends.
Type: Product Teaser, Editorial, Promotion, Personality
Tone: Clever, Snappy, Self-Aware
This one hits the sweet spot and plays with expectations. It sounds like you’re describing weekends, but you’re really describing your offer.
It’s a great line for product roundups, digital tools, or anything that’s frictionless.
