Enjoy 2X Points with Our Premium Tier
Tone: motivational
Gamified points program? Double the reward and watch clicks soar.
Keep math simple: explain how many points equal one reward. If you can, mention the average premium tier order value lift to connect it to ROI.
You’ve Earned a VIP Boost, Claim Your Free Month
Type: Loyalty Sweetener
Tone: celebratory
Award language triggers dopamine. In the email, be sure to mention the exact usage milestones the user achieved. Then move on to the upsell: extend perks beyond the free month with a discount on annual.
Your [Brand] journey turns two today, a surprise awaits
Type: Loyalty anniversary, subscription upgrade push.
Tone: Warm, friendly, slightly mysterious.
The word “journey” suggests a narrative and piques curiosity. Meanwhile, “surprise” triggers the Zeigarnik effect, which is when the brain wants to resolve unfinished business.
Tips
- Follow with an email body that reveals the gift in the first scroll.
- Limit the offer window to 48 hours; scarcity lifts click‑throughs.
Sneak Peek Restock, Early Access to [Product Name]
Type: Pre‑Launch Teaser
Tone: Mysterious, exclusive
“Sneak Peek” hints at secrecy, and “Early Access” rewards loyal fans.
Quick note, sprinkle product photos but blur them slightly for intrigue.
Tips
- Send to loyalty program members first, then open the floodgates 12 hours later.
- Add a short testimonial carousel in the email to refresh product value.
Sneak peek, early access to our new collection
Type: VIP / Loyalty
Tone: Exclusive and conversational
This new arrival email subject line uses “sneak peek” to signal a backstage pass. “Early access” adds scarcity, making loyal subscribers feel seen.
Use it 24 hours before a public launch. Exclusivity phrases can raise click‑through by 18%. Test it on your segmented VIP list, watch the lift, and then roll wider if engagement spikes.
Be First in Line for New [Product Name]!
Tone: VIP, urgent
Everyone likes special treatment, right? This subject line promises insider status, using “Be First in Line” to signal exclusivity.
Use it for limited editions or pre-orders and send it to loyalty program members or those on the waitlist. Pair it with a flash sale in the email body and remind readers that once items are gone, they’re gone for good.
An Honest Apology and a Bonus Inside
Type: Loyalty
Tone: humble, generous
Add a small gift card or discount to foster goodwill.
This makes the service feel more human and proactive. The bonus turns the apology from mere words into tangible value.
Still on board? Enjoy a fresh perk inside
Tone: Encouraging, incentive‑driven, upbeat
Why It Works
“Still on board?” checks loyalty, while “fresh perk” promises immediate value.
The whole subject line stays under 50 characters, which helps mobile previews.
Attach the perk in the email body: a small credit or cheat sheet to justify the open.
When to Use
Great for SaaS renewals or memberships with lapsing engagement.
Tips
- Use merge tags to insert the plan name, e.g., “[Plan] perk just landed.”
- Remind them of unused features to spark curiosity.
Thanks for thinking of us. Here’s your referral link!
Type: Customer Success, Loyalty Program
Tone: Grateful, Positive
Gratitude has a power most people underestimate.
Use this subject line when thanking customers who actively promote your service or product.
The key here is appreciation first, action second. By starting with “Thanks,” you anchor the relationship in goodwill. Then you slide in the referral link, which feels like a bonus rather than a demand.
This works well after someone mentions you on social media or gives a shout-out, and you want to make it easy for them to refer again with a trackable link.
Happy Birthday [first name]! A special gift awaits
Birthday emails are personal, so they outperform generic promos. Birthday email open rates at 45% or higher, three times regular sends.
Send the note at 8 AM local time.
The subject lines like these promises a gift rather than a sale, which sparks curiosity. Inside, place a “Claim my treat” button and a countdown timer to drive action.
Even if the shopper skips the coupon, the warm wish lifts brand sentiment and drives future engagement.
Type
Personal Milestone, Loyalty
Tone
Celebratory, warm, delight-focused
Your VIP code inside, [first name]
Why I picked it
I lean on the promise of exclusivity, and I anchor the line with a first-name token because personalized subject lines lift opens by roughly 26%, according to an CampaignMonitor study.
Pair “VIP” with “code” and you hint at savings without clutter. The phrasing stays short, just nine words, which plays nicely on mobile screens.
The mix of curiosity (“inside”) and urgency (“code”) nudges shoppers who skim at speed.
Type
Marketing, Loyalty Reward
Tone
Friendly, exclusive, lightly urgent
Example email
Hey [first name],
You earned VIP status, so I tucked your private 20% code below. It works until midnight.Enjoy shopping.
— [Brand]
You made the Black Friday VIP list
This subject line uses status to increase open rates.
People like feeling chosen, and the phrase “VIP list” subtly creates a sense of social proof without saying much. It also avoids the phrase “exclusive deal” which is way overused around this time.
This line works well if you’re running an early access campaign or tiered promotions.
Bonus tip: pair this subject line with a dynamic first-name token in the preview text to increase personalization.
Type
Black Friday, Loyalty, Early Access
Tone
Personal, flattering
This subject line can also be
- You’re on the early access list
- Only for our VIPs: Black Friday starts now
