Big Move for [Name], your promotion deserves a high five
Type: Promotion, Career
Tone: Upbeat, personal
Readers see their name first, then an action they just achieved. That pairing sparks recognition in two seconds.
Tips
Swap “promotion” with the specific title, keep verbs lively, and add an emoji only if your list likes them.
You climbed the ladder, let’s celebrate together
Type: Promotion, Celebration
Tone: Friendly, motivational
The short action plus the invitation feels inclusive. “Climbed” paints a clear visual. This phrase establishes a direct connection between effort and reward, resonating with goal-oriented readers.
Your next chapter at [Company] starts now, congrats
Tone: Encouraging
The subject line nods to momentum. “Next chapter” frames the promotion as part of a bigger story, which primes the reader for future content such as onboarding resources.
Tips
Add a quick timeline inside the email: “Week one, coffee with your new team, week two, first sprint.”
Love wins, congrats on tying the knot
Tone: Romantic
The short opening, “Love wins,” signals that the payoff comes first and the details come second. The idiom “tying the knot” is both familiar and lively.
You reached 100 rides with us, thank you
Tone: Appreciative
Why It Works
Milestone plus gratitude drives reciprocity, plus numbers in the subject improve open rates.
First year with [App] complete, congratulations
Tone: Warm
Phrases “first year” and “complete” form a neat temporal bookend.
