A strong sales subject line can spark interest before your pitch loads.
These 11 examples are short, clear, and easy to act on. From polite check-ins to limited-time deals, each one strikes a balance between urgency and respect, helping your message stand out in a crowded inbox.
Type: Sales Inquiry
Using a first name and making a specific request—in this case, pricing—sets clear expectations. Including “Pro Plan” shows that you have reviewed their tiers and avoids the rookie mistake of asking for publicly available information.
Type: Business, Sales
Tone: Polite, Curious, Clear
Short, plain words tell the reader exactly what you want, so open rates rise.
“Quick” signals a light lift, and “Pricing Update” brings relevance.
Query email subject lines like this often see 5–10% higher open rates than vague requests.
Hi [First Name],
I noticed the new pricing page and wondered if the annual plan still includes priority support. Could you share a quick confirmation?
Thanks,
Alex
Instead of asking for something, you offer availability. The phrase “just say go” gives a green-light language and removes friction.
If you reach for it after a demo when the prospect needs to loop in another decision-maker. It signals patience without going radio-silent.
If you sense hesitation, pair the body with one actionable step:
That way, the reader knows the next move is easy.
Encouraging, Warm, Informal
A two-hour window sounds wildly tight, and that scarcity pushes clicks.
Global averages show only 19.21% of broadcasts get opened, so stacking “flash,” a firm timeframe, and an emotional adjective (“crazy”) can vault you above the norm, based on WebFX 2025 email benchmarks.
I avoid symbols, lean on rhythm, and break the rule of perfect form just a touch, because that imperfection reads human.
Flash Sale
High-energy, urgent
For SaaS, lead with the benefit (“upgrade”) and quantify savings. The specificity sidesteps vague hype, and “Pro Plan” clarifies scope.
Personalized versions lift opens by roughly 22%, so adding a first name token can bump performance further. Because B2B buyers weigh ROI, a direct dollar figure satisfies the analytical side, while “save” strokes the emotional side.
SaaS Subscription Promotion
Professional, value-driven
You can trust scarcity. Words like “urgent” or “expires” push opens because they spark fear of missing an offer.
I keep the line short, so mobile previews don’t clip the promise. The phrase “24 hours” states a clean deadline, and “heads up” feels conversational, not pushy.
Together, clarity and urgency create a gentle nudge, and clarity also steers clear of spam triggers.
Limited-Time Sale
Urgent, direct
Sales or success follow-up
Professional, respectful
Specific timing, “Yesterday” proves the note is fresh, and gratitude for time acknowledges that calendars cost money.
By naming the call, you jog memory and signal next steps hide inside. Aim this at prospects after demos or users after onboarding chats.
Keep the body tight: summary, one actionable link, and a promise to listen. The subject sets an expectation of brevity and value, so deliver both.
Sales, Nurture, B2B Follow-Up
Conversational, low pressure
You’re not chasing. You’re not begging. You’re just asking. That’s what I like about this subject line.
It respects the prospect’s inbox, and it makes space for a “yes,” “not now,” or “no thanks.” All of which are better than silence.
This phrasing works especially well for B2B cycles where deals go cold after a call or proposal. By referencing their earlier interest, you reconnect without sounding automated. The question format also boosts open rates than flat statements.
Polite, Direct, Slightly Urgent
This subject line acknowledges the gap while keeping things professional. “Quick reminder” tells them it’s short.
“Did you see my last note?” leans conversational, not robotic. This is useful when you already sent an email and want a subtle way to follow up without sounding demanding.
I suggest follow up with this after 2-4 days if the first message had a clear CTA.
It works well for internal communication too. When chasing up a coworker or vendor.
One tip: avoid this subject if your previous email wasn’t very actionable. Otherwise, it may come across as unclear.
Final, Calm, Assertive
This one signals finality, which can actually increase replies. “Before I close this out” suggests that the offer or opportunity has a limited time frame.
Use it when you’ve followed up once or twice and still haven’t heard back.
It’s a soft deadline, not a hard one, and it comes across as respectful.
The tone is important; don’t sound passive-aggressive. Keep the message short and polite.
This approach is especially helpful in sales pipelines because dragging out an unresponsive lead can hurt your forecast. However, it also works for job recruitment and open feedback loops.
Professional, Sales, Account Management
Cordial, Clear, Confident
You and your recipient already share context, so naming the exact day anchors the memory and sparks recognition.
That simple cue nudges the reader’s brain to recall the earlier conversation without feeling poked.
Use it when the previous exchange ended with a promised next step, a price quote, or a meeting invite.
To keep momentum, schedule to send three business days after your last contact, ideally between 10 AM and noon local time. This window tends to dodge morning inbox traffic while catching midday attention.
Smart, right?
Example email:
Hi [First Name],
Quick follow up on our chat from [Tuesday]. Let me know if the proposal lines up with your goals or if you need tweaks.
I’m happy to jump on a quick call.
Thanks,
[Your Name]